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BEST IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, 29th May
ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1
ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1
The graph below shows the number of men and women who died because of random disease, in March, during the period of 1999-2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
SAMPLE ANSWER
The graph compares the number of deaths caused by a random disease, in Mars, over a period of six years i.e. from 1994 to 2004.
For the initial two years, the deaths amongst women were higher as compared to men. During the first year, a margin of approximately 4 hundred thousand was marked, however it declined to nearly 200 thousand in the second year. Although men dying of the random disease increased in 2001, a slum was observed in women deaths.
In the next three years, from 2002 to 2004, the figures in case of both men and women went down, with both the numbers almost leveling out in 2004. With a boom in the deaths of women in 2002, after the dip, the next three years marked a dramatic fall.
Over the entire period of time, the number of men and women, dying of random disease, showed opposite trends. Women saw a steady decline till 2000 before slumping in 2001 and booming in 2002, after which marking a considerable decline. While, number of men remained steady till 2002, with slight fluctuations, before ending up at a decrease in 2004.
