BEST IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, 8th October

BEST IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, 8th October

ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1

BEST IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, 8th October
BEST IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, 8th October

ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1

The two tables show statistics of workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

BEST IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, 8th October
BEST IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, 8th October

SAMPLE ANSWER

The two tables compare from last year the number of workers in the US that were of US birth to the number of workers who were of foreign birth. The tables include divisions of workforce by gender and by age, summarizing the total number of workers in the workforce, the number of employed and unemployed workers and finally the unemployment rate. All figures are in thousands.

When looking at the breakdown of the figures by gender, the male foreign birth workforce suffered a lower unemployment rate (8.9%) than the male US birth workforce (10.6%), whereas the female foreign birth workforce suffered a higher unemployed rate (11.1%) than the female US birth workforce (8.5%). Overall, the make foreign birth workforce suffered marginally higher rate unemployment (8.8%) than the US birth workforce (9.6%). The total US birth workforce in size was significantly larger (129,533 people) than the total foreign birth workforce (24,357 people).

When looking at the breakdown of the figures by age, the younger of the foreign birth workforce (16-24 and 25-34) suffered from lower unemployment rates than the workforce of native birth, however, the foreign workforce older than these bands suffered higher unemployment rates.

In conclusion, in spite of the much larger numbers involved with the US birth workforce, the percentage differences in terms of unemployment were never very different with the largest difference being 2.8% higher rate for the US birth workforce found in workers between the ages of 16-24.

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