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BEST IELTS General Writing Task 1, 27th August
GENERAL WRITING TASK 1
GENERAL WRITING TASK 1
You have written an article for a magazine about the job that you do. Write a letter to your manager and ask for his/her comments regarding the article which will be published in a famous magazine next month. In this letter, you should say
– Explain why you have written this article.
– Give a short description of what you have written.
– Specify what particular things you want him/her to comment on.
SAMPLE ANSWER
Dear Mr. Rajesh,
I am writing this letter to request you to critique my article which I have written for the ‘Jobs Today’ magazine. This magazine is a monthly and it describes various job opportunities for the young people of today. This month their focus is on various jobs related to industry. I have written this article to throw light upon the ways in which a fresh graduate can join jobs related to the manufacturing industry.
In this article I have written about the qualifications needed for the various levels of work done in the industries. For example, what different opportunities are there for diploma holders, degree holders in technology and business management, and also for those who want to step into the world of work right after senior secondary education. I have also written about our company’s policies on hiring and training the fresh employees and also about the prospects of promotion.
I would be highly grateful if you spare some of your precious time to go through my article and see if I have missed out something important or if there is any other mistake in my article. ‘Jobs Today’ is a very popular magazine and this article would also act as an advertisement for our company. Therefore, it should be flawless and at the same time interesting to read.
Hoping to hear from you soon regarding this matter!
Yours sincerely,
Bumika
