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BEST IELTS Writing Task 1 Academic, 19th October
IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1
IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1
The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
SAMPLE ANSWER
The two chart provided represent the status of prison inmates in the UK. While the first data indicates the rate of offenders between sexes, the second figure shows the difference of criminal convictions between man and woman of different ages.
It is clear that in the UK, the percentages of male and female criminals significantly differed. The rate of criminal convictions of male outweighed that of females at every age.
Aged 10 to 20, the rate of convictions in the UK increases from 2% by male and 0% by female and peaked at the age of 20, with 16% and 4% respectively. At age 20 onwards, the convictions rate tended to fall gradually. The subsequent decades see a dramatic decrease in the rate of the offender at both sexes, accounting for 8% and 1% by man and woman at 45 age – slipped to mere 2% and 0% at 60 age.
Besides, the remaining pie chart shows that 96 percent of all prisoners are men while only 4 percent are women.
